Found some old poems... Oh boy. lol

[catlady]

So I came across some old poems, one actually is someone elses website. They musta liked it enough to post it haha... this one..

I rewind sometimes in my empty mind
To feel pain release like unwinding time
And sometimes the fear is to hard to appose
Knowing this path was wrong that I chose
I take an ounce of this sinful pleasure
An essence of lies bound in rapture
It’s like a shot of poisonous rain
That drips down my spine like immortal pain
I try to stand up to catch my fall
But I’m broken to pieces with no one to call
No one understands this pain that I’m feeling
And no one even knows how I’m dealing
To chase a lie with a shot of depression
Like saying I quit and I’m only guessing
No one will ever know the life that I’m living
Welcome to my world of true addiction

Anyone else write poetry or creative writing? Or am I the only word nerd? lol

 

[Hannah Bee]

I do some writing!

Here's one of my poems:

And I Just Stood There.

You were zooming on the highway
And a truck went sideways.
Colliding in front of my eyes,
And I just stood there.

You were clearly going to your girl
To ask to give marriage a whirl.
Happened going the same way,
And I just stood there.

I was about to drink away
Hoping my sorrows won’t stay.
I didn’t know what to do,
And I just stood there.

When I, after all these years, told you I love you
You got mad, and told me that we aren’t cool.
You thought I wanted to turn you into a mess and left,
And I just stood there.

I didn’t know why
But I didn’t want to pry.
I knew what to do,
And I just stood there.

I called nine double one
Told them you were a victim of a hit ‘n run.
They told me to try to see if you were alive,
And I just stood there.

Luckily, someone stopped and pulled you out of the car
But his CPR was below par.
Shouted he was wrong for putting too much pressure,
And I just stood there.

“Why not do it? And judging by your plate,
You are a doctor, he badly needs a professional at this state.”
Simply, I told him, “I cannot, now do it properly.”
And I just stood there.

I was afraid you’ll be mad at me
Or that you’ll still pick her more than me.
Now you’re six feet below the ground,
And I just stood there.

 

[catlady]

I do some writing!

Here's one of my poems:

And I Just Stood There.

You were zooming on the highway
And a truck went sideways.
Colliding in front of my eyes,
And I just stood there.

You were clearly going to your girl
To ask to give marriage a whirl.
Happened going the same way,
And I just stood there.

I was about to drink away
Hoping my sorrows won’t stay.
I didn’t know what to do,
And I just stood there.

When I, after all these years, told you I love you
You got mad, and told me that we aren’t cool.
You thought I wanted to turn you into a mess and left,
And I just stood there.

I didn’t know why
But I didn’t want to pry.
I knew what to do,
And I just stood there.

I called nine double one
Told them you were a victim of a hit ‘n run.
They told me to try to see if you were alive,
And I just stood there.

Luckily, someone stopped and pulled you out of the car
But his CPR was below par.
Shouted he was wrong for putting too much pressure,
And I just stood there.

“Why not do it? And judging by your plate,
You are a doctor, he badly needs a professional at this state.”
Simply, I told him, “I cannot, now do it properly.”
And I just stood there.

I was afraid you’ll be mad at me
Or that you’ll still pick her more than me.
Now you’re six feet below the ground,
And I just stood there.

Wow. That is very emotional and dark. I enjoyed it. I use to write a lot like that when I was in my teens, as you can see above. I can tell you have creative spark. You should follow it and see where it leads you.

 

[Danielson]

Probably on top of the teachers desk

 

[Hannah Bee]

Wow. That is very emotional and dark. I enjoyed it. I use to write a lot like that when I was in my teens, as you can see above. I can tell you have creative spark. You should follow it and see where it leads you.

Thanks! I usually write stories, I'm not too much on poetry. )

Probably on top of the teachers desk

You got me. He was my English teacher.

 

[Danielson]

From hearing you talk he didn't do his job very well, or maybe he did depending on what kind of job you were looking for.

 

[Nano]

So I came across some old poems, one actually is someone elses website. They musta liked it enough to post it haha... this one..

I rewind sometimes in my empty mind
To feel pain release like unwinding time
And sometimes the fear is to hard to appose
Knowing this path was wrong that I chose
I take an ounce of this sinful pleasure
An essence of lies bound in rapture
It’s like a shot of poisonous rain
That drips down my spine like immortal pain
I try to stand up to catch my fall
But I’m broken to pieces with no one to call
No one understands this pain that I’m feeling
And no one even knows how I’m dealing
To chase a lie with a shot of depression
Like saying I quit and I’m only guessing
No one will ever know the life that I’m living
Welcome to my world of true addiction

Anyone else write poetry or creative writing? Or am I the only word nerd? lol

Read my promo in my match with Adam against Jwab and Eddy in the IWT and you'll see how shitty my poems are. Now seriously, I wrote some when I was younger and now I have no time to do it so I just do it when I have some time and only for the IWT.

 

[Danielson]

Sun-blistering summer nights
Swallow the dusty trail home,
but I turned away.
The world is a lake of fire,
and we have one cold heart each.

 

[Hannah Bee]

From hearing you talk he didn't do his job very well, or maybe he did depending on what kind of job you were looking for.

HARDY HAR HAR DANNY. P