-i noticed that you over-use the white in your sig. In a bad way ofcourse.
-Try to make your image more clear rather than being blurred.
-why you reduce the intensity of the main psds? i think its better to keep the opacity at full (100%) instead.
-reduce the glow around the psds, its too much imo.
-the pattern plate you used over the layer looks bad imo, that is a wrong choice of pattern. Try blend the pattern towards the psds and reduce the intensity of it (why not try a different color instead of white all the time?)