Yeh this is some poor work, sorry man.
I think it's possible to fix it. The bg is ... interesting. It's a different combination of colours etc, but yeh it's just sooo dull with that pic in the middle, and having it blended in doesnt help either.
Try bringing that pic right out of the bg, no blending, nothing. Add some detail/contrast to this piece, and I think that could save it.
The text, go completely white or black. No shades of gray.