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-watch out for the orientation.
-you could have cleaned (cut off) the hair that is coming out of his hand a bit. Just to make it look better image of him.
-Text needs alot of work. think of something that your text would actually improve or add depth to the theme youre using.
-the grain was fine, but try reduce the grain from his face abit.
-try make the film strip's images more opaque.