I actually quite like this piece. I saw it in another section and I stopped to look at it more than what I was reading.
I love the idea, it's simple and effective imo. The two pictures either side could be changed somehow (whether it be changed to bw/, or blend them into the bg) to push the middle picture. The middle picture could also have something done to the colour/contrasst to help here. Now that I'm looking at it, change the contrast with ur two back pictures with the front. The front picture has less contrast than the two back pictures, and it seems off.
The text, looks great with the brush you've used. The bg is very simple, but pretty cool. some more detail, even some smaller brushes used to create more contrast would be nice - whether it be with a white or black.