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  1. Marty McFourth

    AMA General Promo Discussion Thread

  2. Marty McFourth

    AMA General Promo Discussion Thread

    Got my first babyface promo up. It was tough after writing a heel for so long, and trying to decide where to start from. Trying to give my guy some confidence without coming off too cocky as well. Enjoyed writing it.
  3. Marty McFourth

    AMA General Promo Discussion Thread

    I don't see any problems with it. If all the peeps in match agree to go all out and want to do MORE than they need to, then I think that's pretty awesome. I'm all for not limiting creativity if people want to go all out for the fun of it.
  4. Marty McFourth

    AMA General Promo Discussion Thread

    I'm pretty sure we did this last time, or at least we both discussed how many words were both thinking of doing. Which really was nice for me.
  5. Marty McFourth

    AMA General Promo Discussion Thread

    I don't see why not if all involved are game. I usually put my all in to just the one, or it'll be two when I'm doing two characters, but I know there's some on here that would be happy doing multiple promos with others.
  6. Marty McFourth

    AMA General Promo Discussion Thread

    You do a good job adding the spice whilst keeping her babyface. And honestly, I like when babyfaces have an edge about them anyways. Like I find her personality great. Just wanted to say how much I loved the description in the first paragraph. You describe absolutely everything, and it really...
  7. Marty McFourth

    AMA General Promo Discussion Thread

    Thank you, Rosie! I tried to remember the 5 senses thing you told me. Still got a long way to go, but I'm happy you noticed improvement. :)
  8. Marty McFourth

    AMA General Promo Discussion Thread

    Ah yeah, I probably should have posted my thoughts in this thread actually. Good shout. I love that about her lol, it's why I said she reminds me of Dva a tad. When you're playing Overwatch she'll use voice lines like she's playing a video game. That's a really great wrestling persona to bring...
  9. Marty McFourth

    AMA General Promo Discussion Thread

    This is amazing Beavie, thank you :proud The advice on the descriptive writing is sooooo helpful. Especially remembering all the five senses, I've never done that and it's going to make such a massive difference next time I had him backstage somewhere, but I definitely could have done a better...
  10. Marty McFourth

    AMA General Promo Discussion Thread

    So with my promo up, if anybody has any feedback I'd welcome it :) No pressure, only if you have time but I'd be taking things on board for next time From my own POV I think my descriptive writing needs work and setting the scene a bit better. I'd like to hear what you guys thought of it, and...
  11. Marty McFourth

    AMA General Promo Discussion Thread

    Wow, thanks for this Juice! When I understand roleplaying a bit more I'll be sure to return the favour and feedback some of your work. Thank you for taking the time to do this.
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