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  1. Travs

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    ONLY PERSON TO DO SO, MAY I ADD.
  2. Travs

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    Until I beat her :P
  3. Travs

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    It's hard to find, but it's golden when you find it.
  4. Travs

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    Because if you think about it, you just spoke nonstop for basically one massive paragraph about three times.
  5. Travs

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    So Death, to improve that promo I'd say more description and maybe a few breaks in between speaking so it flows more realistically.
  6. Travs

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    That's true, but you still need it.
  7. Travs

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    You'd better not be.
  8. Travs

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    If you can get your audience visualizing what's going on in the scene instead of just reading it, then you're doing well.
  9. Travs

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    But ignore Beaver's reply when I say that description goes a long way.
  10. Travs

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    Hey, when you've got time on your hands...
  11. Travs

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    You could put a little bit of description in between 'ah' and 'this stage is big' describing him looking down and around the stage and stuff.
  12. Travs

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    For example, you start off with 'ah, this stage is big'
  13. Travs

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    I feel you need more stops to describe what's going on.
  14. Travs

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    No it's good.
  15. Travs

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    link me, Beav
  16. Travs

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    *salutes*
  17. Travs

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    Deathlock, if you wanna talk about promos and stuff I'm here to help.
  18. Travs

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    It's about realism, if you don't put time into your character then how are others supposed to?
  19. Travs

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    Give it your best shot, describe them like you ARE them.
  20. Travs

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    Nice to meet you.
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