Klawz Presents l WWE Raw Reloaded

[THE Brian Kendrick's Biceps]

bm: me
wm: divas, i just cant get into them
bp: orton/jericho
wp: na
af: not a bad first show, but i didnt really like how the pins went so far down the page. still a very enjoyable show to read

 

[PureGreatness]

Best Match: Main Event
Worst Match: I'm not sure actually i liked them all really
Best Promo: Liked the way all of them were put together.
Worst Promo: Same as above
Additional Info: I liked the presentation for all it looks pretty good i will be continueing reviewing.

Sorry if you wanted like a worst match and stuff i just didn't feel there was one.

 

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The show begins airing footage of last weeks events.

Orton: Even if he wanted to Mr McMahon would not dare fire me because he knows, just like everyone backstage knows that I am THE elite superstar. My mix of pace, power, technique, agility, strength, athleticism and speed is matched by nobody to have ever stepped in a wrestling ring.

Crowd boo

Orton: All of those abilities, every single one of them is why I am the WWE champion and is why I am the grea-BREAK THE WALLS DOOOOOOWWWWWN!

Crowd is show cheering

Jericho:Seen as you came out here running your mouth about being the definition of an elite superstar, how about you prove it and defend the WWE Championship against me, right here TONIGHT!

Orton: NO! However, I do have this for you, I'll give you a deal. Tonight, Randy Orton versus Chris Jericho in a non-title match and if you beat me i'll give you your title shot, but If I beat you, you will never, ever- be able to challenge me for the WWE title as long as I hold it.

A shot is shown of Jericho's face contemplating

Jericho: You're on Bitch!

Orton and Jericho are both seen smiling before the show speeds up to the main event between the two. The main moments of them match are shown from a back drop from Orton, to a turnbucklr dropkick from Jericho. Jericho is now seen outstreching his arms as the crowd are going crazy

King: You know what that means, Jericho is looking for the codebreaker.

The lights then suddenly go out

King: What's this?

Jericho's name on the titantron is seen melting and the lights come back on. Jericho although still confused walks over to Orton and now lifts him up to attempt the Codebreaker maneuvre and then the screen goes black and white as Orton goes for the RKO. It is shown being executed three times from different angles before then pin is done and the bell rings.

JR: Orton connected with the RKO to win the match after the mysterious lights going out.

King: Jericho is out of the title hunt.

Randy Orton picks up Jericho and tosses him outside of the ring and then raising the belt

JR: Hey lookout now!

Suddenly a person dressed completely in black and in a mask comes into the ring behind Randy Orton who has no idea. The mystery person then taps Orton on the shoulder and Orton turns around. The mystery person across Randy Orton's chest and he holds him by the shoulder connecting with the rock bottom which then changes the screen colour to a light blue colour.

JR: Was that - a rock bottom?

The person is seen standing there before the final scene is shown of Orton laying on the mat out cold

"To Be Loved" begins to play

The scene goes to a studio in Stamford CT with Todd Grisham standing in the middle

Todd: Welcome, welcome to another edition of Raw Reloaded and what a jam packed show we have for you tonight. Many questions were left unanswered last week and noone moreso then what happened in the main event. Jericho was distracted by a melting message and then Orton was laid out by a mystery person. What's going on? I don't know, you don't know, not even Mr McMahon knows, but this past week on Raw, Chris Jericho wanted to find out.

Jericho is seen pacing around in the ring for a few seconds before the crowd begin chanting his name

JR: Jericho looks visually P.O'd

King: I would to if I were him

Jericho continues pacing as he begins to talk

Jericho: Last week I was in the main event, facing Randy Orton in order to keep my WWE championship hopes alive. If I won i'd be the number one contender for the WWE championship, but if I lost I wouldn't be able to face Orton for the title again whilst he holds it.

Jericho suddenly stops pacing

Jericho: I lost.

The crowd boo as Jericho continues pacing

Jericho: Now you see, I wouldn't mind if Randy Orton beat me in a match fair and square, I mean after all as much as I hate to say it or even think it, he is the WWE champion so a loss to him wouldn't be the worst thing on my record. But that's not how it went down.

King: He's right about that

Jericho: I had the upperhand. I was on top. Orton was down and I was gearing up to hit my all new move the Codebreaker. The all of a sudden some jackass turns out the lights and then my name appears on the jumbotron. Yeah, Jericho appears on the titantron and then it starts to melt. I mean what the hell is that? My name melting, what is that supposed to mean. All that took about 10 to 20 seconds then the lights came back on, but in that time Orton had enough to regain enough strength allowing him to catch me with the RKO and end my hopes of facing him for the WWE championship.

Crowd boo

Jericho: The person that showed that message cost me a title shot in the forseeable future and i'm not to pleased with that, in fact, i'm pissed off.

Crowd cheer

Jericho: So whoever did that last week and cost me my match, get your monkey ass out here and get ready for me to whoop it.

Crowd cheer again

JR: Jericho's calling whoever did that out here.

Jericho: Get out here if you got any balls. If you haven't got any grow some real quick and get your ass out here.

Crowd cheer as Jericho paces around the ring frantically.

King: Jericho wants to get him some tonight

Jericho continues pacing and there is no sign of anyone appearing Jericho then goes to raise the mic to his mouth but as he is about to speak the lights go out.

King: Here we go again

JERICHO appears on the Jumbotron yet again. It has the binary numbers flashing and flickering around it and then the word Jericho begins melting away

King: It's happening again

The word finally melts away and then the screen goes black

JR: Now what?

The words "Save_Us" now appears on the screen in the same style as Jericho did. It also begins flickering but then it stops and changes to say "Save_Yourself"

JR: Save yourself?

King: What's going on here?

The words "Save_Yourself" suddenly explode in a ball of fire and flames appear on the ramp. Familiar piano keys are then heard playing through the arena speakers as the crowd gasp. The lights turn red.

JR: Could it be?

A big ball of fire blasts on the ramp and out emerges a man to which the crowd boo a gasp

King: It's Kane! It's Kane!

JR: The big red monster Kane is here!

Kane walks down the ramp wearing his mask and his top consisting of one sleeve missing. Jericho is in a state of shock and confusion as Kane approaches the ring slowly and menacingly.

JR: Kane is here, Kane cost Jericho the match last week!

Kane is at the ring and he lifts himself onto the apron using the top rope ut before he can enter the ring Jericho goes in for the attack

JR: And Jericho here not wasting any time and going on the attack with some wicked punches.

King: I don't know how he's even able to fight, i'm still in shock.

Jericho lands some punches on Kane as the crowd cheer him on. He runs to the opposite ropes, bounces off them and jumps to hit a flyong forearm to Kane, but Kane counters hitting Jericho with a powerful uppercut which knocked Jericho back even with all his forward momentum and it quickly causes a halt to the crowds cheering.

JR: What an uppercut!

Kane enters the ring over the top rope and now walks slowly towards a downed Jericho. He pulls Jericho up by his hair and then slaps his hand across Jericho's throat.

King: Uh oh, this isn't good.

JR: It sure isnt and look at the height....chokeslam!

The crowd boo as Jericho is laid out by the forceful chokeslam. Kane then picks Jericho up and tosses him out of the ring following close behind.

JR: What now?

Kane lifts Jericho up into a gorilla press position

JR: Oh no

Kane walks with Jericho above him and then drops him face first into the barricade as the crowd gasp.

JR: What is all of this about?

Jericho is now dazed largelt but still conscious. Kane lifts Jericho to his feet and then begins lifting Jericho as if he was going to scoop slam him but he doesn't complete it and Jericho's legs are wrapped around Kane's head.

JR: Oh no, not on the outside, no, no!... Tombstone Piledriver!

The crowd are jeering and booing at Kane's actions

JR: This is haenous. Somebody has gotta stop this.

Kane stares down at Jericho as the crowd continue to boo him.

King: What is all this about?

Kane then grabs a hold of Jericho's hair and pulls him by it. Still pulling Jericho along by the hair, Kane walks towards Lillian Garcia and she quickly gets up and shuffles backwards as he walks past her. Kane arrives at the announce table and lets go of a lifeles Jericho. He takes off the top of the table then chucks it to the floor. JR and King both get up and out of their seats.

JR: Oh no, what is Kane thinking now?

Kane removes one of the two monitors and then throws it to the floor. Kane then removes the other monitor and is about to throw it to the floor but then

King: Enough is enough, this has gotta be stopped.

Kane overhears what Lawler said and then he throws the monitor full throttle right into his head. The crowd gasp and sigh at the unprovoked attack. King is immediately knocked to the ground. Out of sheer shock, without thinking JR shouts:

JR: WHAT ARE YOU DOING!? STOP THIS!

JR comes to the realisation of what he said but it's too late as the relentless Kane grabbed JR by his coat and dragged him over the announce table. JR tries to escape but to know avail as Kane swings him viciously into the steel steps. Kane then lifs JR up, put his arm around his throat and chokeslams him on the floor.

The crowd's booing now changes to an eerie squiet with few shouts being heard.

Kane removes the other monitor before going to pick up Jericho. He raises him to his feet, grabs him by the throat, lifts him up and a sickening crash is heard as Jericho is chokeslammed through the announce table. Suddenly a voice is heard in the arena-

???: Enough Kane, that's enough.

A man is seen walking out and he stops at the top of the ramp. It is to be none other than Eric Bischoff. The crowd ohh and aah in shock and amazement before they begin booing. Kane's music begins as he walks slowly towards the backstage area. Bischoff has a cocky yet maniacal grin on his face as Kane approaches him. Kane reaches Bischoff and stands looking at him. Bischoff does a quick nod and Kane nods back in a slower manner. Kane turns towards the ring area and he raises his arms then slams them down igniting fire on the stage as Bischoff laughs and the crowd boo as the scene ends and we go back to the studio with Todd.

Todd: So it was The Big Red Machine that was behind the mysterious message that cost Jericho his chance at the title last week. And even more so it was the return of Eric Bischoff that was seemingly behind Kane going on the vicious and relentless attack this week spreading even to JR and King. King's injuries required stitches but he will be back this week on Raw but JR sustained a broken finger as he tried to protect himself from the vicious chokeslam he received and he will be expected back in two to three weeks. Speaking of injuries, Chris Jericho had some major bumps and bruises but he is expected to return very, very soon. Total carnage was left in the arena by Kane and with the monster in this mood and Bischoff seemingly master minding it, this duo is certainly not one to be messed with. Coming up next:

The graphics change and "To be loved" plays in the background as Lance Cade is shown making his way to the ring

Todd: With JR and King injured myself and Jonathan Coachman stepped into to take over and the first match we had to call was Lance Cade taking on Super Crazy, and after his loss to his mentor last week, he wanted to get back to winning ways.

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Todd: Hello and welcome back to Raw Reloaded. After losing last week, Lance Cade wanted to put on a performance and show why he is one of the WWE's future stars. He was up against Super Crazy and this is how it unfolded.

Super Crazy and Lance Cade are a few metres apart in the center of the ring before they lock up with eachother. Super Crazy tries to push Cade but Cade only takes one step back before pushing Crazy making him fall to the ground. The crowd boo as Cade smiles.

Coach: If I were Super Crazy I wouldn't want to have a power match against Lance Cade.

Todd: Cade certainly does have a very impressive physique and some raw power too.

Super Crazy rushes towards Cade and gets in a lockup with him again but Cade does the same by pushing Crazy down halfway across the ring

Coach: Crazy has got to think of a new strategy if he wants to get anywhere in this match

Crazy is down on one knee in the opposite corner to Cade. Cade taunts Crazy by raising his hand signalling that Crazy is small. The crowd boo.

Coach: They can boo all they like but it's the truth, Crazy is short.

Crazy runs towards Cade but when he gets close, he ducks, springboards off the second rope behind Cade and then connects with an elbow to the back of Cade's head knocking Cade down. Crazy goes for the cover:

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Coach & Todd: OH!

The crowd say 'OHHH' as Crazy lies on the mat

Todd: WHAT a clothesline. He almost decapitated Super Crazy there.

Coach: Well he might as well have because Super Crazy is out.

Cade checks his jaw before going over to Crazy and lifting him to his feet. He lifts him off his feet and hits a powerful fallaway slam launching Crazy all the way to the opposite side of the ring. The crowd boo as Cade outstreches his arms as to say it was nothing.

Coach: The confidence exuding of Cade can clearly be seen

Todd: You gotta have some confidence to challenge Shawn Micheals to a match, which he did last week...and lost. But Cade here almost stalking Crazy as he gets to his feet.

Crazy is stumbling to his feet then as he turns around Cade runs full throttle at Crazy and lands a devastating boot to the face of Crazy. Cade covers Crazy.

Todd: He calls that the Train Wreck and this one - is - over

Ding Ding Ding

Cade's music begins as he gets gets up

Coach: Wow!

Lillian: Here is your winner, Lance Cade!

Coach: A dominating win for Lance Cade here tonight against a very capable opponent.

Todd: That's right, Super Crazy is no - Hold on lookout here.

Cade's music fades out as the crowd boo with Cade picking Crazy up by the hair.

Todd: What's he doing?

Cade slaps Crazy around the face as the crowd boo with every slap. He then grabs Crazy's arm and connects with a short arm lariat.

Todd: Well this is uncalled for.

Coach: How do you know?

Todd: Well for one the match is over.

Coach: Yeah well Super Crazy might have done something to Cade backstage. You don't know the circumstances so don't comment.

Whilst the commentators were speaking Cade had placed Crazy in the corner. He is now unloading punches on Crazy relentlessly. Suddenly a portion of the crowd begin cheering and it gradually grows.

Todd: It's Shawn Michaels!

Michaels slides into the ring and Cade is still unknowingly punching Crazy. Michaels taps Cade on the shoulder and he turns around right into-

Coach: Lookout-Oh!

Todd: Sweet Chin Music!

Cade falls face first to the mat as Michaels music begins to play. Micheals is seen standing over Cade shaking his head and saying something that can't quite be made out as Todd begins speaking over the images

Todd: Micheals had seen enough of Cade taking advantage of Super Crazy and for the second week in a row he laid Cade out with some Sweet Chin Music. Cade can't be too happy about this but there's nothing he can do if he keeps getting knocked out by Michaels. Right now the mentor certainly has the upperhand over his former mentee.

The scene changes and Kofi Kingston and CM Punk are seen talking to each other

Punk: I still can't believe we did it, we whooped their asses

Kingston: Yeah I know man, we smacked dem upside their heads to become de new world tag te-

CM Punk and Kingston both stand up and look at something. Elijah Burke and Shelton Benjamin walk onscreen to a roar of boos from the crowd

Burke: The new tag team champions, yeah we know.

Punk: Ever heard of knocking

Benjamin: We knock for people we respect and we don't respect either of you.

Burke: You see, we had you last week, we had you beat but Mr Jamica over here cheated.

Kingston: What you mean I cheated!?

Benjamin: Everybody saw it, you grabbed his legs at the end of the match when you shouldn't even have been near him.

Punk: What! The only reason he was near you is because you tried to illegally attack me.

Burke: Hey hey, listen, we're not here to talk specifics.

The crowd laugh as Burke and Benjamin were speaking specifics a few seconds before

Burke: What we want is a rematch, a rematch at Backlash in three weeks.

Benjamin: What do ya say, Punks?

Kingston: You got it.

Burke: That's what i'm talkin' bout.

Burke and Benjamin walk offscreen after giving Kingston and Punk dirty looks

Punk: Idiots.

Punk and Kingston begin talking amongst themselves again as Todd speaks over the image

Todd: So we have our first match for Backlash. CM Punk and Kofi Kingston against Shelton Benjamin and Elijah Burke. Plus next week Punk will be taking on Benjamin in one on one competition. The next few eeks will be a rollercoaster for these competitors.

The scene now changes and Randy Orton is seen backstage in Vince McMahon room talikng to Vince

Todd: Orton was still feeling the effects of last weeks atack on him, more mentally than physically and Orton refused to compete until he found out who it was. How did Vince take it? Take a look for yourselves.

The scene changes back to this past weeks Raw with Orton and McMahon standing in his office

Orton is still pissed at what happened last week so he is speaking in an enraged voice

Orton: I know you saw what happened last week Mr McMahon, I know you saw it. After I rightfully won my match against Chris Jericho, unexpectedly I was attacked by an unknown person, a person dressed all in black. This person attacked me and laid me out, laid me out with a move we all know...the Rock Bottom.

The crowd cheer wildly at the mention of The Rock

Orton: Now if that WAS The Rock and he thinks he's making an impact, then he'd better think again because when I lay my eyes on him, i'll kick him right in the-

McMahon: It's not The Rock.

Orton: Sorry say what?

McMahon: The person that attacked you last week, it's not The Rock.

The crowd boo as Orton looks confused

Orton: You know who it is? You know who did that to me last week?

McMahon: That's right Randy, I DO know who it was. I know exactly who it was because I was there when they signed the contract to return the WWE.

Orton: Well then who is it? Who did that to me last week?

Vince pauses for a few seconds

McMahon: I'm afraid I can't tell you that. You see, to get this man back in the WWE was very hard and one thing in that contract stated that he would make random appearances and that I could not tell a soul who it was. I didn't know he was planning to attack you, but that is the reason I can't tell you.

Orton does a 180 and shouts damn before turning back around. He stays silent for a few seconds before speaking

Orton: Well then I am not competing in a match until I find out who this guy is. I don't want anymore sneak attacks.

McMahon: That's fine because you will find out who it is before you compete. That's right, it was in his contract, he gets an immediate WWE title shot and it will be against you Randy, in three weeks at Backlash.

Orton looks shocked as the crowd cheer

McMahon: Now if you'll excuse me, i've got an announcment to make.

McMahon leaves his office as the camera stays on a shocked Orton for a few seconds before going back to Todd in the studio.

Todd: So now we know that even though the Rock Bottom was hit last week, it wasn't done by The Rock. The only person that knows who it is, is Mr. McMahon, but he can't say anything about it because of contractual obligations. However he has dropped a bombshell by announcing that at Backlash, this mystery person will take on Orton for the WWE championship. If you're lost don't worry, we all are.
Coming up next

The scene changes and Vince McMahon is seen talking in the ring

Todd: Mr. McMahon had a major announcement to make. Wabt to find out what it is? We'll be back right after these messages

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Todd: Hello once again. Mr McMahon this past week had a very special announcement to make, but who would have known it would end up the way it did. Take a look.

The show goes back to RAW

Vince is seen in the ring and his music is just fading out as he begins to speak

Vince: This is it. I have now got a wrestling show of elite superstars. Superstars that have the ability and the drive to be the best. Superstars, superstars that have got big, wholesome, giant, grapefruits.

The crowd ooh at the statement. Vince lowers his voice for the next sentence

Vince: Although not as big as mine

The crowd ooh again as Vince smiles

Vince: But nonetheless, we have elite superstars, but you see, with all these great stars we need them to be controlled. We need then to be managed, but with so much for me to do being the chairman of the WWE

Crowd boo

Vince: That person just can't be me. So! The announcement I need to make is that Raw, Raw is getting a general manager.

Crowd cheer

Vince: That's right, Raw will have a new general manager and that person will be-HERE COMES THE MONNAAY!

Shane McMahon emerges to a cheer from the crowd and shock from Vince. Shane does his jumping motion at the top of the ramp and then the scene cuts to Shane and Vince in the ring.

Shane: Hey Dad. Now I know, I know that you need a new general manager and Dad, who better to be GM than your own son.

Slight cheer from the crowd

Shane: Yeah, yeah, think about it dad. Your own son taking charge of THE number one wrestling show in history. It'll be like you passing down your legacy just like your dad did to you. Hell, I owned my own show, when I had WCW.

Vince: Which I then put out of business.

Crowd do a mixture of cheering and laughing

Shane: That's right, you put me out of business, but you gotta admit it was close. Dad, think about it. I can do it. I can manage all of the egos, I can make the money making matches. Just gimme a shot and i'll prove it.

The crowd cheer slightly as Vince stands contemplating what to do.

Coach: What's he gonna do?

Todd: Will Shane be the GM?

The crowd have a mix of yes's and no's

Vince: Well that settles it. The new general manager of Raw, my son, Shane Mc-I'M ALL GROWN UP!

Stephanie's McMahon's music begins to a large cheer from the crowd as she emerges into the arena

Todd: Wait a minute, wait a minute!

Coach: It's the billion dollar princess, Stephanie McMahon.

The scene cuts to Stephanie in the ring as the crowd cheer

Steph: Hold on a minute daddy. There is no way that Shane should be GM of Raw, especially when you can choose me. Sure, Shane has owned his own show, but so did I because remember, I ressurected ECW.

Vince: I also ran that into the ground

Steph: Yeah you did, but you only did it two weeks ago. WCW was killed off years ago so clearly I have the better judgment as to what can be successful.

Shane: What? You didn't choose ECW. You got it because I had already taken WCW and ECW was the only one left.

Steph: Dad tell him to shut up/

Vince: Let Stephanie speak Shane

Stephanie looks at Shane in effect saying shame

Steph: Than you daddy. As I was saying, just like Shane owned WCW, I owned ECW, but, I have something Shane doesn't have and that is experience. I was GM of Smackdown for over a yearand I controlled everyone there and there were some big stars, Kurt Angle, The Rock, Triple H, The Big Show the list goes on.

Steph pauses

Steph: If anybosy should be GM, it should be me because I have all the credentials to manage this group of elite superstars. So, what do you say daddy?

The crowd are now split booing and cheering as Vince looks back and forth at Shane and Stephanie

Todd: This is a real dilemma for Vince.

Coach: What is he gonna do?

Vince looks at Stephanie

Vince: No.

Shane jumps and hugs Vince as the crowd boo and cheer. Stephanie has a look of shock on her face.

Vince: Hold on there Shane, I can't choose you either.

Shane stops celebrating and the crowd laugh as Streph face becomes less shocked

Vince: I can't choose between my son and daughter just like that. However, I can do this. For the next two weeks Raw will be managed by either one of you. Next week it'll be Shane and the week after it'll be done by you Stephanie. I will watch your perfomances and then at Backlash, I will announce who is the new general manager of Raw.

The crowd cheer

Vince: Good luck, kids.

Vince McMahon's music begins as he leaves the ring and walks up the ramp looking at Shane and Steph whilst the look at each other knowing that they are in competiton. Todd begins speaking over the images

Todd: So, Vince couldn't decide between his children, but he did have a solution. In the weeks leading up to Backlash, both Shane and Stephanie will be temporary GM's of RAW and at Backlash itself Vince will decide which of the two, will, be the permanant GM of RAW. The coming weeks of RAW are certainly not to be missed.

Todd: We have a divas match coming up for you next but before we do, I have to show you a clip of the beautiful girls from Extreme Expose. We don't have time to show you the whole thing but I can show you who I thought looked best and that was the stunning Layla.

The show comes back with Todd standing with his outh wide open

Todd: Sorry, but she just looked AMAZING. Definitely more from Expose next week. Back to RAW and This week Jillian was going to take on Melina for the chance to be WWE champion, but Jillian stated that she didn't want to take on one of her best friends so she refused to participate. However she did hand pick the replacement for her, Maria.

The match begins and Melian and Maria circle the ring before tying up with eachother. Maria tries to push but Melian pushes Maria straight to the mat. Melina taunts to the crowd but as she does Maria gets up and hair pulls Melina to the mat.

Coach: Woah, she's a feisty one

Todd: Maria is really improving in the ring as of late.

Melina gets up staright away and then punches Maria right in the face and then does a hair pull of her own taking Maria to the ground. Melina then mounts Maria

Todd: Melina here, with some vicious blows right to the head of Maria. There's no doubting that Melina is one hell of a competitor.

Coach: Plus she's hot.

Todd: That too as Melina here swing Maria viciously into the corner.

Melina walks to Maria and then raises her leg to Maria's throat choking her

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Melina breaks the hold as Maria falls to the floor

Coach: Gotta love that flexability

Melina picks Maria to her feet and swings her into the ropes and as Maria is running back

Todd: Hey look at this here, Huracanrana by Maria and that is what I mean, she getting better and better everyday.

Both divas get to their feet but Melina is dazed. Maria bounces of the ropes and connects with a flying clothesline. Melina gets up quickly and gets hit by another clothesline. Maria picks up Melina and swings her into the turnbuckle. She runs at Melina and her ass connects with Melina's stomach making Melina sit. Maria notices and begins swinging her arm and shouting

Coach: Oh I love this move

Maria runs at Melina to hit the bronco buster but Melina moves out of the way in the nick of time.

Coach: That's gotta hurt.

Melina pulls Maria by the hair to the center of the ring and nails a vicious swinging neckbreaker. She goes for the pin

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DING DING DING!

Melina's music begins as she stands

Lillian: Here is your winner, Melina

Todd begins speaking over the images

Todd: So it was Melina who won this match and now goes on to face Mickie James next week to find out who will face the Glamazon Beth Phoenix at Backlash and that should be one hell of a match.

The scene changes and Jeff Hardy is seen approaching the ring

Todd: The match was scheduled, the Intercontinental champion Jeff Hardy taking on MVP, but it didn't go quite to plan. Why Not? Don't go anywhere, Raw Reloaded will be right back?

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Todd: Welcome once again to Raw Reloaded. This week Jeff Hardy was scheduled to take on MVP but that didn't happen. MVP came out just before the match and claimed that he had a doctors note saying that he couldn't compete this week but he did have somebody to fill in for him, none other than his old foe, Umaga.

MVP is seen sitting on a chair next to the announce table area watching the match. The scene then switches to the ring with Hardy laid on the mat and Umaga shouting towards the crowd.

Todd: A vicious kick by Umaga there taking Hardy to the mat

A replay shows of the kick

Coach: That was a straight up kick to the face from Umaga.

The show goes back live and Umaga has his hand clenched on the shoulder of a seated Jeff Hardy

Todd: Umaga her trying to cut the blood supply to Hardy's left arm.

Hardy slowly but surely gets to his feet. He gets some punches in as the crowd begin to cheer but then Umaga viciously hair pulls Hardy to the mat with great impact. MVP is then seen nodding his head.

Todd: MVP enjoying Hardy's pain

Umaga goes back to the same nerve hold on Hardt's left shoukder.

Coach: Umaga using all his power, all his power to drain Jeff Hardy's energy

Umaga screams insinuating that he is applying more pressure and Hardy screams insinuating the same thing. Hardy again rises to his feet slowly. He connects with some punches and a kick which finally breaks him fre from Umaga's hold. Hardy runs to bounce off the ropes, he runs back and full pace and then

Todd: Oh! What power and elevation in that samoan drop from Umaga.

Umaga then gets up and stares at Jeff for a few seconds. Umaga then runs at the ropes behind him, bouces off them, runs back and attempts a jumping splash but Jeff rolls out of the way as the crowd cheer. Both men are laid out.

Coach: Umaga landed face first on the canvas

Todd: You can see from the face that Umaga is down that if he would have connected with that splash, Jeff would've been crushed.

Coach: No doubt about that, but now Jeff has some time to recover and maybe turn the tables in this match.

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Coach: Hardy buildinf some momentum here

Hardy bounsec off the ropes and hits a flying lariat which makes Umaga dazed. Hardy does the same again which makes Umaga even more dazed. Hardy then tries to swings Umaga into the turnbuckle but Umaga reverses it. Umaga runs at Hardy but Hardy moves out of the way. Umaga begins stumbling towards the center of the ring and Hardy scrambles up the turbuckle

Todd: Hey look at this, WHISPER IN THE WIND!

The crowd cheer as Hardy knocks Umaga down. MVP is in shock as Hardy lays on top of Umaga

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Todd: Oh so close, Hardy nearly got the three.

A look of relief is shown on MVP's face as a look of despair is shown on Hardy's. Hardy gets to his feet as Umaga slowly gets to his.

Coach: Hardy must be wondering what he has to to do to beat the samoan bulldozer.

Umaga is dazed and Hardy is waiting for Umaga to turn around. Umaga turns around and and Hardy kicks Umaga in the stomach and underhooks his head as the crowd cheer

Todd: Here we go, the twist of Fate! Oh no.

Before Hardy could even execute the start of the move, Umaga used all his might and drove Hardy right into the corner. Hardy drops to a seated position.

Coach: This isn't good

Umaga sees this and the crowd begin booing immensely. MVP smiles widely as Umaga walks to the other turnbuckle. Umaga screames and then he runs full speed at Jeff

Todd: Jeff Hardy's about to get - hey!

Crowd cheer

Todd: He got out of the way. Hardy evaded the attack.

Umaga is hurt and Hardy gets up quickly, underhooks Umaga head and connects with the twist of fate as the crowd cheer wildly. Jeff ceases the oppurtunity.

Coach: Jeff here, going up to the top turnbuckle, he's going for the swanton!

Todd: Hey what's he doing?!

MVP gets up from his chair at ringside and walks around the ring towards Hardy. Hardy looks at MVP for a few seconds but MVP runs past Hardy and towards the ramp. When he reaches the ramp he stops and just looks back at the ring.

Todd: What was that about?

Coach: I have no idea but Jeff here has to capatalise

Jeff averts his attention back to Umaga and he jumps going for the wanton Bomb as the crowd cheer

Todd: Oh! Umaga rolled out of the way.

Umaga then stands up up and pulls Hardy up to his feet by his hair. Umaga holds Hardy by the hair and screams before

Todd: Oh! The samoan spike!

Coach: This ones over.

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The crowd boo as the drums of Umagas music begins. Umaga stands up victorious and shouts as MVP is shown walking backwards up the ramp smiling. The camera switches between MVP and the laid out Hardy as Todd speaks over the images

Todd: MVP distracted Jeff for a few vital seconds which in the end cost him the match. This will do nothing but feul the rivalry that is beginning to emerger between these two great young superstars. Coming up next:

The scene changes and Orton is seen standing in the ring talking

Todd: Orton said earlier in the night that he wouldn't comepete in a match until he knew who attacked him last week and before RAW went of the air this week, he wanted to have some answers. Don't go anywhere, we will be right back.

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Todd: Welcome back to the final part of WWE Raw Reloaded. Randy Orton wanted some answers and he went out to the ring at the end of the night and demanded them.

Show goes back to RAW

Orton is standing in the ring

Orton:I bet you think you're real funny huh? Attacking me from behind when I least expect it.

Crowd cheer

Orton: Last week, somebody came out here after I was done dismantling Chris Jericho. Sombody came out here and attacked me. Not just hitting me with any move, he rock me bottomed onto the mat.

Crowd cheer

Orton: Now first of all when I finally came to, I thought that The Rock was back and that he was the one that attcked me.

Crowd: ROCKY, ROCKY, ROCKY, ROCKY, ROCKY

Orton:Chant his name all you want because Vonce informed me that it was not, The Rock.

Crowd boo

Orton: So that begs the question, who did it? Who attacked me last week and why did they use The Rock's finishing maneuvre? Well in my opinion whoever it was, they are a yellow bellied coward!

Crowd boo

Orton: Not only did they attack me with a mask on, but they used another persons move. However, if you want to prove me wrong bring your ass out here right now and fcae me face to face.

Crowd cheer

Orton:Come on out here, show yourself!

Todd: Randy Orton wants to know his attacker right now

Coach: Can you blame him?

Orton stares menacingly at the titantron area there is a few seconds of silence when suddenly a familiar theme plays as the crowd cheer and Orton looks in utter shock

Coach: No way! It can't be!

Todd: It is! It's Eugene!

Eugene walks out in his ditzy way clapping his hands and smiling. The scene speeds up to Eugene standing in the ring with a mic in his hands, A Eugene chant is dying out as he begins to speak

Eugene: Hi Randy!

Eugene waves as the crowd laugh and Randy looks angry and confused

Orton: It was you? You were the one that Rock Bottomed me last week and will face me in a match at Backlash for the title?

Eugene looks shy but begins nodding his head

Eugene: Sowwy.

The crowd laugh

Eugene: It's just that you were beating me up so bad that I had to fight back and I used one of my favourite moves from one of my favourite wrestler, THE ROCK!! WOOOOO!!

The crowd cheer with Eugene as even more confusion appears on Orton's face

Orton: Beating you up? How could I be beating you up. I haven't even seen you for the past few months so how in the hell could I beat you up last week.

Eugene: You face me last week Randy, when I was playing Smackdown vs Raw on the Playstation

The crowd laugh uncontrollably as Orton is just shocked by Eugene's stupidity

Eugene: You were pounding me and kicking me so I hulked up and then boom, I hit wou eith some punches. Pow, I body slammed you, I hit the leg drop and then I Rock bottomed you for the win, 1-2-3!!!

The crowd cheer and laugh as Eugene jumps up and down clapping. Randy smiles and watches Eugene but as Eugene jumps up Orton jumps up too-

Todd: Oh! R-K-O to Eugene

Coach: Thank you! He was getting on my last nerve.

The crowd boo loudly as Orton stares at the downed Eugene menacingly and piercingly. The crowd then erupt in a field of cheering.

Todd: Hey look at this!

The mystery man from last week appears in the ring behind Orton as the crowd continue cheering. He is a few metres behind Orton and as Orton turns around

Todd: Hey, that was the spear! That guy just hit a spear!

The mystery person then picks up Orton and puts him in a suplex position. He lifts him up in the air in a stalling suplex position.

Todd: What's this? Oh, THE JACKHAMMER, ORTON JUST GOT HIT BY THE JACKHAMMER!

Coach: What's going on?

The mystery man quickly runs out of the ring, jumps over the barricade and runs to get out of the arena as the crowd swarm towards him cheering. The camera stays on Randy who once again is laid out in the ring

The scene goes to the studio with Todd standing front and center

Todd: So for the second week in a row Randy Orton was left laid on the canvas by this mystery man. This time around the move that was done was the spear followed by a Jackhammer and that has been done by one man in the past, Goldberg. Was it Goldberg that did it or was it like last week and did this perosn use another person's move.

Todd takes a deep breath

Todd: What a week we've had and next week will be even better because Shane McMahon will be in chargeand what will be the repurcussions on others for what happened. Nex weeks RAW is a must see. I'll be there and you'd better be too. Until next week, Grisham, Out.

Todd walk offscreen as the camera fades out

Quick Results

Lance Cade vs Super Crazy
Melina vs Maria - Progresses to the final of Number 1 Contender Tournament
Jeff Hardy vs Umaga

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[Super Klawz]

Sorry for the double post, my bad.

 

[Super Klawz]

A comment, even somebody saying the show was a lump of shit would be better than nothing.

 

[moiversion1]

First don't ask for reviews and dont bump your diary, this is really annoying, so here with we go with the review :

BM : Hardy vs Umaga, it is quite hard to read, see my other comment
WM : Maria vs melina for obvious reasons, even if that reason will do playboy lol
your promos are quite good but you should try to write more in characters? all your wrestlers seem to look like similar when they talk.

AC : it's hard to review your show, as your promos are not really in characters and your matches are not easy to read because of the format. But the effort you put to write this show, the format, the video, this is awesome. I'm sure that some will love it, and some will hate it, I dont know what to say, but this is an unique way to post a show !

 

[Super Klawz]

 

[Super Klawz]

 

[John]

sorry to bump this thread but are you still doing this or not? if not why did you want someone else to change their thread. please say your continuing with this because you have potential.

 

[Super Klawz]

 

[McLovin]

Nice preview, looking forward to the next show

 

[Super Klawz]

Shane McMahon is the temporary GM of RAW this week and he picks it up with so much going on. This week on RAW:​

Randy Orton will be on RAW but due to him not wanting to compete what will he do instead and will the mystery attacker be there yet again?​

The fight for the Number 1 contendership ends as Mickie James takes on Melina to find out who will face Beth Phoenix for the Women's chmpionship at Backlash.​

The teams in competition for the Tag Team titles get out of tag team action for two weeks and this weekthe athletic Shelton Benjamin takes on the always entertaining CM Punk. ​

Eric Bischoff explains what his connection is with the renewed Big Red Machine, Kane and why Kane viciously attacked Chris Jericho.​

Two feuds collide in one match as HBK and Jeff Hardy take on Lance Cade and MVP in a tag team match up​

Post Your Predictions

Melina vs Mickie James

CM Punk vs Shelton Benjamin

Shawn Michaels & Jeff Hardy vs Lance Cade & MVP​