Poem of life

[Kassidy]

Death, God's greatest gift,
Life, God's greatest amusement.
Love, man's source of bliss,
Love, man's source of sorrow.
Happiness, a pigment of our imagination, to describe what we desire,
Anguish, what hides behind a smile, to disguise what really lies.

A man's peace as death awakes,
A baby's cry as it awakes the very first time.
The heart throbs as he falls for the one he loves,
The heart shatters as her words of woe fall from within her lips.
Our laughter and joy are our dreams of life,
Our despair and tears are our reality of life.

People say, "What of hell?"
I say, "What of life?"
We say, "I love you"
She says, "Just leave and go"
They know not the truth, they know happiness,
You know not the lie, you know that word is nothing but a word.

Angel of Death, where may you be?
God of life, shame on thee.
Cupid of love: aims, shoots, and hits,
Cupid's arrow of love/ tranquilizer of cries, in time shall dwindle to bits.
Santa Clause, bring me toys of joy
(Novocain of pain),
Father Time, speed it up, F*&K! Bring it on, cause life SUCKS!

Please, Oh please, kill me now.
Please, Oh please, end it now…

 

[Untouchable]

.....wow....that was depressing.


did you write that? was good but really quite depressing.

 

[CT Styles]

Do You Wanna Die??

 

[Kassidy]

yes i wrote it an yea i am a pretty depressed person an no i wont commit suicide but i wouldnt care if someone came up an shot me in the head. My writing is just my way of getting my feelings out without psychically hurt anyone.

here is one of my others, much shorter an idk if its done i might add to it when i get back in the mindset i was in.

Im tired of Apathetic Apologies and Half Witted excuses

Sick of Blind faith and misguided Truths

Hating a Life with Out passion, searching for a Purpose

Sorrow is the gateway to Truth as Pain is the Long road to Happiness

Try to Kill the pain but it will never go away

Full of broken thoughts as I remember Everything

You become Someone else as Time stains your thoughts

I am still here as Everyone goes away in the End

 

[monkeystyle]

Try to Kill the pain but it will never go away

Full of broken thoughts as I remember Everything

You become Someone else as Time stains your thoughts

I am still here as Everyone goes away in the End

Why don't you just re write the rest of the lyrics of "Hurt" while you're at it.

 

[Kassidy]

hurt is awesome but i didnt rewrite it it is a bit like it though i do see ur point, MS i have to start fresh with that poem cuz i never realized that about the three lines. i wrote it thinking of the whore that left my life

also to everyone who hasnt heard the song you should an here is what ms is talking about i think.

I wear this crown of shit
Upon my liar's chair
Full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair
Beneath the stain of time
The feeling disappears
You are someone else
I am still right here

What have I become?
My sweetest friend
Everyone I know
Goes away in the end
You could have it all
My empire of dirt
I will let you down
I will make you hurt

 

[monkeystyle]

Don't worry about it. Its a very hard habit to break. Pretty much everytime I write something I feel like I've totally ripped off something else. Most of the time its not true, but sometimes it does slip through. My frieds always call me on it though when they read it.

Anyway, your use of words is great, on the dark side, not that there is anything wrong with that. I go in for that kinda stuff myself.

 

[monkeystyle]

Also, I like the timing of your stuff too. It flows nicely.

 

[Kassidy]

well thank u but i still have to rewrite it lol

 

[the dark knight]

yet if i post any of that, all of you would be calling me emo.

anyway, good job kass...

 

[Kassidy]

thanks for the comments

this isnt really a poem but more of a revelation in my eyes of how my life has gone

I question weather live is worth living, to many thoughts are going through my head, alot about giving up an saying fuck it, idk y but i have been crying, and i just fell as if the only way im going to be happy is if im dead. my life is just a bunch of broken things that no matter what i do to fix it,glue,tape,nails,staple, they just undo themselves as i try to hold onto them so tight, I sit here an not only feel my pain but i look out and see what this world is coming to soon enough no one will care about anyone but themselves not even the people they proclaim they love, i see seth, Brandon, my uncle, amy,and the list goes on of people just getting hurt and for what?every one second and moment of happiness is followed by years of pain, i dont want to be alive if to survive i have to give up what makes me who i am, give up my heart,soul, and will. I need help, nothing seems to bring joy like they use to, i can care less if another video game was made, if i never saw anyone ever again i wouldnt care cuz none of it makes me happy, nothing seems real not the tears that fall from my eyes or the blood that flows out of my cuts, imo im already dead i have no will im just waiting .

 

[Dame1]

Don't post this kind of shit, not everyone is down like you may be. I say alot of things in life are fucked up, and all the good things have there are consequences or bad things that come with it. It's filled with jealousy and hate. Polotics and violence. Damn I just went blank....

 

[Kassidy]

^^^ yea u cant tell me what i can and can not post so idc

 

[Dame1]

^^^ yea u cant tell me what i can and can not post so idc

I just did.

 

[Fenix0505]

yes i wrote it an yea i am a pretty depressed person an no i wont commit suicide but i wouldnt care if someone came up an shot me in the head. My writing is just my way of getting my feelings out without psychically hurt anyone.

dang that sounds like me when it comes to rhyming although most of the time i just dont give a Fu*Ck what i say in my rhymes