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AMA General Promo Discussion Thread
Here goes some... feedback. I'll echo what I said to Grim and say it here where you and @Patriot Pants are great when it comes to building the thoughts and challenges of your characters. Have a rough loss? They react accordingly and build into their narrative (though I am so glad I got to fix... -
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Now, let's see if @Canadian Dragon can give the line of Finnish wrestlers a good service. A line which begins and ends with Ludvig Borga of OSW fame. One minor error I noticed was in terms of the lines: So just something to keep an eye on. As an introductory promo, it is a decent sample of... -
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Next, howdy partner! @Nostradamus Wait, why am I helping the person who beat Cali? MINUS FIVE STARS, YOU STINKY-HEAD! (Okay, getting serious) You're still developing Marquise, but I can tell you're making good strides with him. The use of Liz along with her friend from before I feel are nice... -
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WHO WANTS TO TALK PROMOS WITH ROSIE!? *strums guitar and a string breaks* Fuck- Okay, since I already had read your first promo on break and at least have an idea, I'll go with the @Grim Theft Auto first. Aka Yurei: First, something I'll praise again and again, is you always do well at... -
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Looks like I got reading to do after work. -
AMA General Promo Discussion Thread
I'll add you to... THE LIST. Then maybe we can get some Residence development when we have the chance, and maybe you can do some also to my Cali and Vampiress promo, partna' -
AMA General Promo Discussion Thread
Hope you feel better soon! If you can't, I think it is understandable. Don't force yourself! I may write one after work. But 10/10 for the Cali mention since there are obvious parallels with two gals with Japanese experience, dream match incoming. -
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https://wrestlingsmarks.com/threads/cali-and-vampiress-v-blaze-and-gamma.210435/#post-4614787 Now this is a promo I actually would love feedback on mainly because it is my first like... proper match promo with Vampiress. Even if she has appeared in promos and segments with Cali, it was always... -
AMA General Promo Discussion Thread
As the show is... hopefully going to be done soon, I'm just going to do a little reminder. If you want feedback on character, promos, or general storyline stuff and you don't want to get in this thread, then feel free to DM me. I won't help you write match related promos, obviously, but... -
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Cali will dodge the question hard. -
AMA General Promo Discussion Thread
Since I have done some job applications today and I'm a wee bit bored, I'm writing a random "Ask me anything" promo with Cali and her Twitch chat where it acts like an "Out of character" interview, and I could use some questions. Can be serious, can be light-hearted, and anything in between. -
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I'm sorry if your character has been booked for three shows and you still have problems understanding how an e-fed works. Like I get it, maybe it can be on some people in charge for not explaining it well enough for you, or booking you before you were ready, but we've tried to explain and you... -
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It hasn't been booked. Nobody has agreed to it. It hasn't even been built at all. -
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AMA General Promo Discussion Thread
MAYHEM in Japan have kind of a hint of LIJ in New Japan who are a group of anti-heroes. Though now Los Ingonables De Japon are all pretty much Face 100%, they do have some history as heels. MAYHEM is like that but a bit darker, willing to get nasty, but have their limits. Like if an opponent... -
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https://wrestlingsmarks.com/threads/the-same-page.207766/#post-4487594 Wouldn't mind some feedback on how this develops the stories around Cali. -
AMA General Promo Discussion Thread
Now for the Lucha girl doing good Lucha things: I think aside from the general things from the previous promo which can apply here like things to keep in mind for ways to add if you are at a loss, formatting, etc. Just more thoughts on the character may be best to apply. First, for the... -
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First, let's go with the character I'm more familiar with. For starters, I like the use of the motif of fire. It plays on the story you established at the show with the fireball and even with Norman being Aboriginal and playing into motifs of his heritage, something about the fire seems... -
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OH, and yeah, I remember that promo had a lot of Spanish. Since one of my characters speaks Japanese when she is talking to her friends in Japan, I get it. What I do is I just state they are speaking another language, but "translate it" (mostly) by just writing it in English and finding a way to... -
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I've been on a roll for this stuff, so I'll look that over tonight. Just mind linking me them both to make it easier?