[Re-Made] Loreen - DerrickGFX

[Derrick]

Okay, so I re-made the piece I made like a month and a half ago, actually, I found the psd and played further with it. I made changes to the text and found an actual render of the picture I cut out the last time. Tell me if it's any good, because I'm not sure what to use for the PPV. I'll be making more gfx today, so this was a warm-up.

Rate/Hate/Masturbate

Which one's better? Both are new versions.​

 

[Mr. Krueger]

As for which is better, definitely the first one.

But I am not really digging the banner altogether. The PSD is kinda weak and doesn't flow well with the banner. The effect on the background- the twirl thing flows well with the font and works as a background but the PSD doesn't gel with it. 6/10

 

[Derrick]

Yeah. Thanks for the critique man. I definitely need feedback to know what to work on for the next time. I've decided to do something completely new for the GFX League PPV, and I hope it'll be enough for me to win, since I'm in a title match lol.

 

[Mr. Krueger]

Haha. Good luck with it

 

[The_King]

Unfortunately, I just don't think the piece works.
The cut on the render is much better, and it's really smooth so kudos on that. I think the main problem now is the background. The way you presented is plain, and it needs to be played around with a lot to make it pop. Until then, the render just doesn't flow unfortunately.
6.5/10.